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09-11-2003, 03:25 PM
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Hmmmm...perhaps a little too Robert Frost-like. A whooooole lot of visualization...maybe too much unless that was part of the assignment. I know a lot of Comp teachers tell you to write stuff that uses every adjective possible. The wording is good and the descriptions are vivid (though, as I said, perhaps a bit overkill). A bit on the narrative side, but not overly so. I'd say all in all, depending on the assignment, it's a strong B paper...maybe an A.
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