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11-05-2003, 10:40 AM

Yeah, just a few where's instead of were's. I counted at least three.

Also, if this is for school, I would lose the "back in the day" you have towards the end.

11-05-2003, 10:40 AM	#7
SolPol Posts: n/a	Yeah, just a few where's instead of were's. I counted at least three. Also, if this is for school, I would lose the "back in the day" you have towards the end.